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Tuesday, September 3, 2019

lord's prayer

WALT: say the lord's prayer.

Kia tapu tou ingoa
Kia tae mai tou rangatiratanga
Kia meatia rau e pai ai 
Ki runga i te whenua
Kia rite ano ki to te rangi 
Homai kia matou aianei 
He taro ma matou mo tenei ra 
Murua matou hara 
Me matou hoki e muru nei
I o te hunga e hara ana ki matou
Aua hoki matou e kawea whaka waia 
Engari whaka oranga matou i te kino
Nou hoki te ranga tira tanga
Te kaha 
Me te kororia 
Ake, ake, ake.

Amine.







Roller coasters

Thursday, August 22, 2019

Paper chair

S What is the science behind this challenge?  To try make a paper chair that is strongen enougn to hold tebby bear
 esearch this topic using books or and the internet record any 
  1. Start with a six inch square piece of paper. ...
  2. Fold the right and left side so they meet at the middle crease, and crease them well.
  3. The paper should be divided into four equal parts. ...
  4. Fold the paper the other way, and crease well.
  5. Fold the top right corner to meet the first vertical line and crease well. 
  6. enjoy your origami chair 

information you may find.
 E What was your design solution for this challenge? I am going to make a origam chair out of paper

What data can you record for this challenge?

exempla Explain writing

WALT use a rubric to mark a piece of writing. 
success criteria I will use the rubric mark then write why I gave is that point
 I will add total of points and give it a level. 
In our  Tautoro School  we have so many new students who have enrolled  in our school. Because of the new enrollments every time we have a  powhiri or assembly we always get squashed, and we feel really uncomfortable. So the facility that is needed in Tautoro School  is a new hall.
Why do we need a hall?

First a  hall is needed by Tautoro School because when we have new students enrolling in our school, every new child needs  a powhiri. There are more students enrolling into our school every week and we are feeling really squashed in our small library.  If we had a hall our manuhiri would feel more comfortable and they would be able to shake everybody's hands without pushing past students and then they would feel very welcomed, comfortable and feel more relaxed. 

Secondly: if we had a community hall we would also be able to play sports inside.   If it was raining or if it became too hot. Then we wouldn't be missing out on our fitness and fitness  makes you feel good and it exercises your brain. And this would help students to concentrate more in class.

Another reason why we need a hall is so that we could get a kitchen built in the hall then we would be able to have technology at our school instead of travelling to town to use another school's kitchen.  We would be able to learn how to cook and bake and then we would be able to help our whanau cook and bake at home.

Last of all we need  a hall because our community would be able to use the hall in the weekend which will bring  all our local communities together for meetings or gala days.

In conclusion, I strongly believe we need a community hall at our school because our  Tautoro school community is growing every week with new students enrolling into our school. It is important  that we have a new hall so that we won't be squashed and then we would feel comfortable and then we would listen better because we would all feel relaxed. If we don't have a hall we will always feel squashed and we will not have enough room in our teeny library for new students.


                                 Score     Reasons why you have given this mark
Ideas
5
I think that they have lots of ideas that connect to the topic  
Structure Language
5
There witing is stucred appropritely and is well deceloped.
Organisation
5
There ideas are organised into basic paragraph  
Vocabulary
4
They used a range of word and phrases to add Detail and give speciic information 
Sentence Structure
5
They can write a variety  of sentences that are mostly grammatically correct
Punctuation 
5
They can use correct sentences punctuation capital letter and full stop 
Spelling
5
They can spell the majority of essential list words correctly.
Total
34 
4a 

Friday, August 2, 2019

Ihumatao



We have been learning about Ihumatao and the land issue.

We had to choose a side: Maori or Settlers and write how it would of been at the time Here is mine.


“Not my Problem get off my land” I roared!
I stood staring at them. I could feel my body shake, I was proud. 
Ha ha get lost I thought. 
I scanned around slowly. I could see the native poeple packing their belongings. 
I could hear Maori making a plan. 

I could smell the soldiers wet horses.

Thursday, June 20, 2019

Police community

WALT write a persuasive text
Success Criteria:
I will have a title
I will give an opinion
I will have an introduction and a conclusion
                       
 Police  community

In the world there are a lot of crimes happening. We need police because police help us when we are in trouble.

Firstly police are needed because there are bad people in this world. If there were no police there would be lots of crimes being committed without any consequences in the world.

Secondly police are needed because if you are lost you can call the police and they will come and find you or take you home.

Thirdly Police are needed because they protect our communities and keep our streets safe from thugs and bullies. 

So in conclusion that is why I think police are needed to protect us make us feel safe.
 






My learing journey

Tuesday, May 21, 2019

coding with wheae tania

today we had wheae tania and we were doing coding. we were doing it on scratch junior


Friday, May 3, 2019

The best holiday ever

WALT use the correct structure for a recount
 Success Criteria
 I will have a Title
 I will have an orientation(who what where when how)
 I will use sequence words(first next after then finally shortly) 
 I will have a personal comment 

The Best Holiday Ever!

 Last week Mark came to my house, when he got to my house he jumped out of his car and then we ran fast down to see the baby rabbits, they were cute and fluffy.
 After that he asked me if we could go and play on my ps4. I said “sure” So we ran back to the house as fast as we could go.
I turned on the ps4 he wanted to play GTA, so we did. When we were playing GTA we were doing all of the missions.
 Next we wanted to play fortnite. When we Logged onto fortnite the avengers mode came on. We were playing the avengers mode.
It was Thanos vs the Avengers. After the game Mark went back to the lobby to play another game. We were getting tired so we Finally went to bed. It was an amazing day because me and Mark were playing together.

Tuesday, February 26, 2019