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Rippa Rugby-Fire Brigade Cup
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On Thursday morning my team and I drove in my van to the field to have some games of rippa rugby and to have fun.
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I felt pumped to score.
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When we got to the rugby fields we saw a lot of teams.
I said, “Mum I will get a score today.”
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The first thing I did was to practise ripping tags.
I felt amazing when I was ripping tags.
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Next I went to have a game on the field. We played against Kaikohe East School. We won the game.
I said, “Yay! We won the game.”
I felt wonderful.
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After that we had another game and we beat the other team.
I felt like getting a lot of scores.
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Later on we had a rest for the next game.
I said, “This is a fun day.”
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Finally we had our last game. I was trying as hard as I could to score some tries. I was playing in the Tautoro 2 team. I scored 1 try. Our team won the game.
I felt overjoyed.
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