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Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Explanation Writing: Languuage



Explanation Writing: structure


WALT identify the structure of explain writing.     
Plastic pollution is a major problem because the plastic gets into our ocean and kills our sea animals.
What has been done to reduce this terrible problem.
 One thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is people around the world are using plastic bags instead they can use cotton bags.
 Another thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is kids are using litter less lunch boxes. This is reducing the rubbish that they send to the landfill.
The last thing that has been done to reduce this terrible is people around the world are sorting the plastic then the plastic gets sent to a factory to be made into other stuff.
So In conclusion plastic pollution is a terrible problem for our sea animals and seabirds. people are trying their hardest to reduce reuse and recycle the plastic they use.
Highlight the structural features of your text with the following colours.

Beginning/Introduction.
Body-1st paragraph- Main idea.
Body - 2nd paragraph - Supporting detail.
Body - 3rd paragraph - Supporting detail.
Conclusion.


Explanation Writing: My self-assessment.

WALT use the writing rubric to assess our writing.
Plastic pollution is a major problem because the plastic gets into our ocean and kills our sea animals.
What has been done to reduce this terrible problem.
One thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is people around the world are using plastic bags instead they can use cotton bags.
Another thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is kids are using litter less lunch boxes. This is reducing the rubbish that they send to the landfill.
The last thing that has been done to reduce this terrible is people around the world are sorting the plastic then the plastic gets sent to a factory to be made into other stuff.
So In conclusion plastic pollution is a terrible problem for our sea animals and seabirds. people are trying their hardest to reduce reuse and recycle the plastic they use.
Element
Rubric
Score
Ideas
I have several ideas that have some information  
4
Structure
I have some structure for the type of writing.
3
Language
I use appropriate words for the type of writing
Organisation
I put my ideas in groups and order.
4
Vocabulary
I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detil
3
Sentence
Structure
I can write most of my sences correctiy.
4
Punctuation
I sometime use cappital letters and full stop correctly
3
Spelling
I spell most essential list words correctiy.
4

Total 25/3b

Friday, October 19, 2018