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Friday, October 20, 2017

Persuasive Writing We should do homework every night.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.
18.10.2017
We should do homework every night.
 Firstly I think we should do homework every night so we can learn heaps.
Secondly I think we should do homework every night because then we can grow our brain smarter.
Another reason why I think we should do homework every night is so we can achieve our goals by practising our learning.
Lastly I think we should do homework every night because then we can have one on one time with our Mum or Dad.

So that’s why I think we should do homework every night.

Recount Writing going to William's birthday

WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
16.10.17
Going to William’s birthday.
On a lovely sunny Sunday morning me and my family went to William birthday. At William birthday we played some fun  games. The first game was pass the parcel. Then the other game we played  was we had to shoot a balloon. In some balloons there were some lollies and some had dust. After that it was time for William to open his presents. I said to William, “Are those presents cool?”
He said, “Yes.” Next me and V.J and William and my cousins, Kody, Jayden and Edey were playing on William’s xbox 360. We were playing a shooting game. I said to William, “Are you having an amazing day?”
He said, “Yes.”

Later on we had some lunch. I said, “That was a delicious lunch.”  

Thursday, October 19, 2017

Persuasive Writing-We should play sport every day.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.
19.10.17
We should play sport every day.
I think we should play sport every day.
Firstly I think we should play sport every day because you can learn some good skills like dribbling the ball, kicking skills, and throwing the ball .
Secondly I think we should play sport every day because we can get oxygen into our body when we run around outside in the fresh air.
Another reason why I think we should play sport every day is because we learn how to work as a team because if you don’t work as a team we will just fight over the ball.
Lastly I think we should play sport every day because we can get fit by running around the field.

So that’s why I think we should play sports every day.