Recount Writing-Going to the beach.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

26.7.17

Going to the beach.

On  Friday afternoon I travelled with my family to the beach in Paihia to have fun. When we arrived I felt glad. When we got to the beach I saw a lot of people. I felt overjoyed. I said to my mum, “This a cool and a fun day.”  The first thing I did was to build a sandcastle. It was very very fun building a sandcastle. I felt wonderful and amazing. And I saw long boats like a giraffe.  I saw people were going for a swim and they were splashing. I felt happy.  We went back home. That was a fun day.   

Recount Writing-At Rugby

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

2.8.17

At rugby

On Saturday morning my family and I got ready to go to my rippa rugby game in Kaikohe.

After we got ready we drove to the rugby fields in Kaikohe. I felt excited when we got to the  rugby fields. My team  started to get ready so we can  train for rugby. Then we were having a game. We played against Kerikeri. It was  Kerikeri’s kick off. They did a big kick. We were running as fast as a race car to get the ball. After a while it was half time. We had a drink of water. The water was refreshing. After half time we played the rest of our game. We lost but we had a good game. It was fun and I enjoyed playing my rippa rugby game with my team.