Here is my cinquain poem about my Dad.
Thursday, August 30, 2018
Tuesday, August 28, 2018
Litter-less Lunchbox.
We are learning about Plastic Pollution and how it causes problems for our world.
One way I can reduce the rubbish I put in the world
is by bringing a Litterless lunchbox to school.
Friday, August 24, 2018
Tuesday, August 14, 2018
Recount writing The power cut
WALT spice up our writing
06.08.18 The power cut.
On a cold and dark Sunday night my family had a power cut. They was so scared their hands were shaking. They were making burgers for dinner because they were scared. They got the candles. I asked my mum if the burgers were ready. She said, “No.” In my house it was as cold as ice. My sisters hands were shaking because they were scared of the dark. I was trying to look for my mum but I hit the wall. When I hit the wall it hurt. I was just about to cry. But I did not. Then I went into my bed. I was waiting for the burgers. When the burgers were ready I was sleep. But I was up at night when my mum went to sleep. I grabbed my burger. Then I ate it. It taste so yum I did A big mmmm. Then I went back to sleep.
Monday, August 13, 2018
Tuesday, August 7, 2018
Monday, August 6, 2018
My Dad’s birthday
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25.07.18
My Dad’s birthday
On a hot and sunny afternoon me and my mum were making a cake for my Dad.
I was jumping up and down and I had a huge smile on my face.
After we mixed the ingredients we put the cake in the oven to bake.
My nephews came. They brought presents for my dad.
I was jumping up and down and I had a huge smile on my face.
After we mixed the ingredients we put the cake in the oven to bake.
My nephews came. They brought presents for my dad.
Me and my nephews were playing lots of games.
We were waiting for the food and the cake.
When the cake and the food was ready we had the birthday dinner and the cake.
My eyes were wide open and I had a huge smile. “Mmmm, that was so delicious,”
I said.
After that we looked at my Dad’s presents. We were waiting for the food and the cake.
When the cake and the food was ready we had the birthday dinner and the cake.
My eyes were wide open and I had a huge smile. “Mmmm, that was so delicious,”
I said.
I saw some chocolate and some biscuits in one of my dad’s presents.
I asked my dad, “Can we have some chocolate and biscuits?”
He said, “Yes.”
So we had some chocolate and biscuits.
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