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I went to the park.
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On Sunday morning my family and I drove in my van to the park in Kaikohe to have fun.
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I felt really pumped when I got there.
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When we got to the park we saw heaps of things to play on.
“Hmmm.” I said to myself, “What should play on first?
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The first thing I did at the park was play on the slide.
It felt amazing when I was playing on the slide.
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Next I went on the monkeybars. I was like a monkey climbing up a tree.
I said, “This is a wonderful day, Mum and Dad.”
I felt really excellent.
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After that I played in the sandpit. I was building heaps of things.
I felt overjoyed. Then we went back home.
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