Recount Writing - At home.

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

20.03.17

At home.

On Sunday afternoon my mum and my dad and my brothers went to the New World.  Me and my brother went for a swim in my pool.

Then my mum and my dad and my brothers came back and my mum got me an ice-cream.

It was yum. Next I got back into the pool.

Then I went to  play. After that I went on the game. It was cool.

Next me and my mum and dad went to get some lollies and they were yum.

Later on me and my mum and my dad and my brothers watched a movie. It was cool.

Finally my mum said, “Go to bed,” to me and my brothers.