I created this sideshow using ideas from my writing .
Friday, November 9, 2018
Guy Fawkes Day.
Here is my writing to expain why we celebrate Guy Fawkes day.
Every November 5th people in NZ celebrate Guy Fawkes day.
People light a bonfire and launch fireworks.
This happens every November 5th.
Why do we celebrate Guy Fawkes day?
The first reason Why we celebrate Guy Fawkes day is because in
England King James was being mean to the Catholics. So the
Catholic
people wanted to kill King James.
England King James was being mean to the Catholics. So the
Catholic
people wanted to kill King James.
So the Catholics and a man called Guy Fawkes put 36 barrels of
gunpowder under the building where King James was going to
have his meeting.
gunpowder under the building where King James was going to
have his meeting.
But someone wrote a letter to tell King James about the plan to
blow his building.
blow his building.
So King James sent guards to find Guy Fawkes. When they
caught him they tortured him and killed him.
In conclusion every year now people celebrate Guy Fawkes day
to remember Guy Fawkes and what he tried to do to the King of
England.
to remember Guy Fawkes and what he tried to do to the King of
England.
So that’s why we celebrate Guy Fawkes Day.
Friday, November 2, 2018
Plastic pollution.
I created this presentation to share my explanation writing about Plastic pollution.
Wednesday, October 31, 2018
Explanation Writing: structure
WALT identify the structure of explain writing.
Plastic pollution is a major problem because the plastic gets into our ocean and kills our sea animals.
What has been done to reduce this terrible problem.
One thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is people around the world are using plastic bags instead they can use cotton bags.
Another thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is kids are using litter less lunch boxes. This is reducing the rubbish that they send to the landfill.
The last thing that has been done to reduce this terrible is people around the world are sorting the plastic then the plastic gets sent to a factory to be made into other stuff.
So In conclusion plastic pollution is a terrible problem for our sea animals and seabirds. people are trying their hardest to reduce reuse and recycle the plastic they use.
Highlight the structural features of your text with the following colours.
Beginning/Introduction.
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Body-1st paragraph- Main idea.
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Body - 2nd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Body - 3rd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Conclusion.
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Explanation Writing: My self-assessment.
WALT use the writing rubric to assess our writing.
Plastic pollution is a major problem because the plastic gets into our ocean and kills our sea animals.
What has been done to reduce this terrible problem.
One thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is people around the world are using plastic bags instead they can use cotton bags.
Another thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is kids are using litter less lunch boxes. This is reducing the rubbish that they send to the landfill.
The last thing that has been done to reduce this terrible is people around the world are sorting the plastic then the plastic gets sent to a factory to be made into other stuff.
So In conclusion plastic pollution is a terrible problem for our sea animals and seabirds. people are trying their hardest to reduce reuse and recycle the plastic they use.
Element
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Rubric
Score
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Ideas
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I have several ideas that have some information
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4
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Structure
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I have some structure for the type of writing.
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3
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Language
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I use appropriate words for the type of writing
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Organisation
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I put my ideas in groups and order.
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4
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Vocabulary
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I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detil
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3
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Sentence
Structure
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I can write most of my sences correctiy.
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4
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Punctuation
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I sometime use cappital letters and full stop correctly
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3
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Spelling
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I spell most essential list words correctiy.
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4
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Total 25/3b
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