Recount Writing-Playing Rugby in Okaihau

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

4.4.17

Playing Rugby in Okaihau.

On Saturday morning my team Tautoro Titans and I played rugby in Okaihau.

Our first game was against Okaihau. I felt exceptional.  Okaihau had the ball first. They ran fast as but then Rangamarama tackled a boy. Rangamarama got the ball. He passed the ball to Andy.

Andy tried hard to score a try but the Okaihau team were too fast. Next we played Kerikeri. They were another fast team. They kept getting the ball and running fast to score goals. We couldn’t catch them.

We lost both of our games but I had fun because I tackled some people.

Google Draw Poster-Healthy Eating.

Persuasive Writing-Healthy Eating.

I am learning to write my opinion and my reasons.

30/03/17

Healthy Eating

I think we should eat healthy food.

Firstly I think we should eat healthy food because we will have energy to run fast.

Secondly I think we should eat healthy food because we will have healthy skin.

Another reason is we will get healthy eyes.

Lastly I think we should eat healthy food because we will kick high.

So I think we should eat healthy food.

Recount Writing - At home.

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

20.03.17

At home.

On Sunday afternoon my mum and my dad and my brothers went to the New World.  Me and my brother went for a swim in my pool.

Then my mum and my dad and my brothers came back and my mum got me an ice-cream.

It was yum. Next I got back into the pool.

Then I went to  play. After that I went on the game. It was cool.

Next me and my mum and dad went to get some lollies and they were yum.

Later on me and my mum and my dad and my brothers watched a movie. It was cool.

Finally my mum said, “Go to bed,” to me and my brothers.

Persuasive Writing - Rules at School.

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

14.03.17

Rules at school.

I think we should have rules at school.

Firstly I think we should have rules at school because we will have a safe school.

Secondly I think we should have rules at school because then people won’t get hurt.

Another reason is because we will have a happy school.

Lastly I think we should have rules at school because everyone will feel happy and safe.

So I think we should have rules at school.

Here are my learning goals for term 1. 2017.

Recount Writing

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

13.03.17

At home

On Saturday morning I went to play on my waterslide with my friend and his name is Jadin.

First me and Jadin had fun on the waterslide.

Then we went to play tag. It was fun as.

Then we went to get a sandwich. I had jam and Jadin had jam too. It was yummy.