Monday, August 13, 2018
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Monday, August 6, 2018
My Dad’s birthday
WALT use show ' don't tell ' to spice up our writing
25.07.18
My Dad’s birthday
On a hot and sunny afternoon me and my mum were making a cake for my Dad.
I was jumping up and down and I had a huge smile on my face.
After we mixed the ingredients we put the cake in the oven to bake.
My nephews came. They brought presents for my dad.
I was jumping up and down and I had a huge smile on my face.
After we mixed the ingredients we put the cake in the oven to bake.
My nephews came. They brought presents for my dad.
Me and my nephews were playing lots of games.
We were waiting for the food and the cake.
When the cake and the food was ready we had the birthday dinner and the cake.
My eyes were wide open and I had a huge smile. “Mmmm, that was so delicious,”
I said.
After that we looked at my Dad’s presents. We were waiting for the food and the cake.
When the cake and the food was ready we had the birthday dinner and the cake.
My eyes were wide open and I had a huge smile. “Mmmm, that was so delicious,”
I said.
I saw some chocolate and some biscuits in one of my dad’s presents.
I asked my dad, “Can we have some chocolate and biscuits?”
He said, “Yes.”
So we had some chocolate and biscuits.
Friday, May 18, 2018
Sunday, May 13, 2018
Monday, May 7, 2018
My holiday Recount.
WALT use the correct structure and language for recount writing
3.5.18
Going to Kerikeri
On a sunny Saturday afternoon my and my brother and Misty went to Kerikeri. We were going to New World.
We were going to do some shopping for groceries.
After we got the groceries. We were going to town to look for shops that were open. But no shops were open. So my brother asked me if I would like to go to Mcdonalds.
I said yes so we went there. I got a big mac and drink.
I thought it was yum.
When we finished eating our food we
had to go to the park. At the park I was playing on the monkey bars. It was super fun on the monkey bars. When I finished playing on the park we went back to New World to get the van to go back home.When we finished eating our food we
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