I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
26.7.17
Going to the beach.
On Friday afternoon I travelled with my family to the beach in Paihia to have fun. When we arrived I felt glad. When we got to the beach I saw a lot of people. I felt overjoyed. I said to my mum, “This a cool and a fun day.” The first thing I did was to build a sandcastle. It was very very fun building a sandcastle. I felt wonderful and amazing. And I saw long boats like a giraffe. I saw people were going for a swim and they were splashing. I felt happy. We went back home. That was a fun day.
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