I am using my chrome book to play the music for you are my Sun Shine.
Tuesday, December 11, 2018
Friday, November 9, 2018
Guy Fawkes Day.
Here is my writing to expain why we celebrate Guy Fawkes day.
Every November 5th people in NZ celebrate Guy Fawkes day.
People light a bonfire and launch fireworks.
This happens every November 5th.
Why do we celebrate Guy Fawkes day?
The first reason Why we celebrate Guy Fawkes day is because in
England King James was being mean to the Catholics. So the
Catholic
people wanted to kill King James.
England King James was being mean to the Catholics. So the
Catholic
people wanted to kill King James.
So the Catholics and a man called Guy Fawkes put 36 barrels of
gunpowder under the building where King James was going to
have his meeting.
gunpowder under the building where King James was going to
have his meeting.
But someone wrote a letter to tell King James about the plan to
blow his building.
blow his building.
So King James sent guards to find Guy Fawkes. When they
caught him they tortured him and killed him.
In conclusion every year now people celebrate Guy Fawkes day
to remember Guy Fawkes and what he tried to do to the King of
England.
to remember Guy Fawkes and what he tried to do to the King of
England.
So that’s why we celebrate Guy Fawkes Day.
Friday, November 2, 2018
Plastic pollution.
I created this presentation to share my explanation writing about Plastic pollution.
Wednesday, October 31, 2018
Explanation Writing: structure
WALT identify the structure of explain writing.
Plastic pollution is a major problem because the plastic gets into our ocean and kills our sea animals.
What has been done to reduce this terrible problem.
One thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is people around the world are using plastic bags instead they can use cotton bags.
Another thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is kids are using litter less lunch boxes. This is reducing the rubbish that they send to the landfill.
The last thing that has been done to reduce this terrible is people around the world are sorting the plastic then the plastic gets sent to a factory to be made into other stuff.
So In conclusion plastic pollution is a terrible problem for our sea animals and seabirds. people are trying their hardest to reduce reuse and recycle the plastic they use.
Highlight the structural features of your text with the following colours.
Beginning/Introduction.
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Body-1st paragraph- Main idea.
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Body - 2nd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Body - 3rd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Conclusion.
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Explanation Writing: My self-assessment.
WALT use the writing rubric to assess our writing.
Plastic pollution is a major problem because the plastic gets into our ocean and kills our sea animals.
What has been done to reduce this terrible problem.
One thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is people around the world are using plastic bags instead they can use cotton bags.
Another thing that has been done to reduce this terrible problem is kids are using litter less lunch boxes. This is reducing the rubbish that they send to the landfill.
The last thing that has been done to reduce this terrible is people around the world are sorting the plastic then the plastic gets sent to a factory to be made into other stuff.
So In conclusion plastic pollution is a terrible problem for our sea animals and seabirds. people are trying their hardest to reduce reuse and recycle the plastic they use.
Element
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Rubric
Score
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Ideas
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I have several ideas that have some information
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4
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Structure
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I have some structure for the type of writing.
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3
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Language
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I use appropriate words for the type of writing
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Organisation
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I put my ideas in groups and order.
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4
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Vocabulary
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I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detil
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3
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Sentence
Structure
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I can write most of my sences correctiy.
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4
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Punctuation
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I sometime use cappital letters and full stop correctly
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3
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Spelling
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I spell most essential list words correctiy.
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4
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Total 25/3b
Friday, October 19, 2018
Monday, September 3, 2018
Thursday, August 30, 2018
Tuesday, August 28, 2018
Litter-less Lunchbox.
We are learning about Plastic Pollution and how it causes problems for our world.
One way I can reduce the rubbish I put in the world
is by bringing a Litterless lunchbox to school.
Friday, August 24, 2018
Tuesday, August 14, 2018
Recount writing The power cut
WALT spice up our writing
06.08.18 The power cut.
On a cold and dark Sunday night my family had a power cut. They was so scared their hands were shaking. They were making burgers for dinner because they were scared. They got the candles. I asked my mum if the burgers were ready. She said, “No.” In my house it was as cold as ice. My sisters hands were shaking because they were scared of the dark. I was trying to look for my mum but I hit the wall. When I hit the wall it hurt. I was just about to cry. But I did not. Then I went into my bed. I was waiting for the burgers. When the burgers were ready I was sleep. But I was up at night when my mum went to sleep. I grabbed my burger. Then I ate it. It taste so yum I did A big mmmm. Then I went back to sleep.
Monday, August 13, 2018
Tuesday, August 7, 2018
Monday, August 6, 2018
My Dad’s birthday
WALT use show ' don't tell ' to spice up our writing
25.07.18
My Dad’s birthday
On a hot and sunny afternoon me and my mum were making a cake for my Dad.
I was jumping up and down and I had a huge smile on my face.
After we mixed the ingredients we put the cake in the oven to bake.
My nephews came. They brought presents for my dad.
I was jumping up and down and I had a huge smile on my face.
After we mixed the ingredients we put the cake in the oven to bake.
My nephews came. They brought presents for my dad.
Me and my nephews were playing lots of games.
We were waiting for the food and the cake.
When the cake and the food was ready we had the birthday dinner and the cake.
My eyes were wide open and I had a huge smile. “Mmmm, that was so delicious,”
I said.
After that we looked at my Dad’s presents. We were waiting for the food and the cake.
When the cake and the food was ready we had the birthday dinner and the cake.
My eyes were wide open and I had a huge smile. “Mmmm, that was so delicious,”
I said.
I saw some chocolate and some biscuits in one of my dad’s presents.
I asked my dad, “Can we have some chocolate and biscuits?”
He said, “Yes.”
So we had some chocolate and biscuits.
Friday, May 18, 2018
Sunday, May 13, 2018
Monday, May 7, 2018
My holiday Recount.
WALT use the correct structure and language for recount writing
3.5.18
Going to Kerikeri
On a sunny Saturday afternoon my and my brother and Misty went to Kerikeri. We were going to New World.
We were going to do some shopping for groceries.
After we got the groceries. We were going to town to look for shops that were open. But no shops were open. So my brother asked me if I would like to go to Mcdonalds.
I said yes so we went there. I got a big mac and drink.
I thought it was yum.
When we finished eating our food we
had to go to the park. At the park I was playing on the monkey bars. It was super fun on the monkey bars. When I finished playing on the park we went back to New World to get the van to go back home.When we finished eating our food we
Friday, April 13, 2018
Did I achieve my Term 1 2018 learning goals?
Watch my video to see if I achieved my learning goals for this term.
Sunday, March 25, 2018
My awesome learning wall.
Here is a snapshot of the results of my maths, writing and reading tests and where I am at in my learning.
Sunday, March 18, 2018
Swimming the length of the pool.
My friend and I are showing how we
can swim a length of the pool, kicking our feet
and stretching out our body.
Swimming on my back.
My friend and I are showing how we
can swim a length of the pool on our backs
with a flutterboard.
My Reading Test - Term 1 2018
This is a Level 23 text.
My Time at School is 3 years and 7 months so I am reading at
my expected level.
Thursday, March 15, 2018
Right and Responsibilities.
I have the right to
Play with sport equiment
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I have the responsibility to
put the sport equipment back
and look after it.
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Tuesday, February 27, 2018
Explanation Writing-Bucket filling
WALT use the correct structure and language for Explanation writing
Bucket filling
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A bucket filler is someone who says nice things to other
people so that everyone in the world can be a Bucket filler too. | |
When you fill other people’s buckets your bucket gets filled
too with nice thoughts and feelings.
Other people need you to fill their bucket with good thoughts
and feelings and they will fill yours.
You can talk nice to them nicely then they will talk nicely
back to you. | |
Bucket filling makes everyone around you be happy and
safe. So there will be no mean people. |
Monday, February 19, 2018
Friday, February 16, 2018
Recount writing Going to the wedding.
12.2.18
Going to the wedding.
On Saturday morning me and my family got ready
to go to my cousin’s wedding in town.
The first thing I did was get changed into my clothes.
Then I did my hair. We started to leave.
When we got to the wedding we sat down on the chairs.
We waited for my cousins to come through the door.
Next they went on the stage.
This man started to talk. After a little while they got the rings.
I felt happy. After that we had some food.It was yummy.
Finally we went back home and we had some cake.
The cake was delicious.
to go to my cousin’s wedding in town.
The first thing I did was get changed into my clothes.
Then I did my hair. We started to leave.
When we got to the wedding we sat down on the chairs.
We waited for my cousins to come through the door.
Next they went on the stage.
This man started to talk. After a little while they got the rings.
I felt happy. After that we had some food.It was yummy.
Finally we went back home and we had some cake.
The cake was delicious.
Wednesday, February 7, 2018
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